December 16th, 2006

revising my poetry portfolio, oh joy of joys

In anyone has any constructive criticism of my poetry it would certainly be appreciated! Actually, just plain criticism would be acceptable as well. So now's your chance to tell me just how much my poetry sounds like Emily Dickenson had an awkward, drunken one night stand with T.S. Eliot and then the resulting love child got food poisoning and threw up on my poetry assignments.

Speaking of fun metaphors:

likeafox: a well used semicolon can make me weak in the knees

abbers44: i have such a semicolon kink